#3 ON THEIR WAY - "Disillusion"

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TRIVIA 👇💡

  Usually my comics have a written script I subsequently base on the storyboard. Here's rare preview of the script (much longer than the actual comic).

   It was that time of the year when "veteran" cops trained new agents who came into police.

Gloria taught a 21 years old guy how to use a radar (named Drew)

G: you hold it like this.

D: wow, it like car spotting, but with a radar.

G: yes!

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Later, Drew attempted to check a driver, only to be shunned. 

D: agent Drew speaking, ID please!

Driver: please what? Don't you see you look like a broom?

D: but that's my job!

Driver: now they employ all sticks they got from street blah blah. 

  Unfortunately, the driver speed away and Drew accidentally fell on ground. Keith saw the whole thing.

  Triiiiiift

  K: tincan, where do you live? In jungle?

  Keith shouted after the driver and wrote a ticket for him.

  At the station, he found Drew retired in the cloakroom with minor injuries on hands.

  K: are you alright?

  D: not really. 

  K: I'm sorry I wasn't here with you at the moment. 

  D: anyway, I'll quit this job.

  K: why? You spent two years in school and now you quit within a week? 

  D: if my life is in danger that's not worthy at all.

  K: look... 

  A week past since then. No answer from Drew was available, but only a call from a colleague on duty.

  C: I need help!

  At the scene, Keith discovered Drew who arrested a thief holding a stolen bag.

  D: he likes pink actually!

  Keith helped him put cuffs on thief.

  K: so you decided to stay?

  D: yes, ahem! 

END. (Written on 2/6/2024).